What do you think of my original song?

It's for Rosie:

Give me 1 chance I know you think i'm weird, I know you think i'm
crazy.Lately i've been being critizised as just being lazy,

Your friends have never liked me, they told me to shut up and go
away,I hope I will get the chance to actually talk to you today.

I never completed a full sentence on a stage.I never won a track
ribbon, not even 6th place.

I know to you this will sound pretty silly,But i love it when your
brown hair flows so freely.

(chorus)
You think you know me, but you've only seen a bit.I have so much more
to offer, you don't even want to hear it. So far you've seen 1 third
of me, you think that's all there is.But remember there's still 2
thirds left, thats what make all the difference. So give me 1 chance,
chance, chance;Give me 1 chance, chance, chance, chance.So think about
it, give me 1 chance
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@Day

What the hell?!?!?!?!